Touch of your Hand
Blatant molecular implosionNo cohesion for matter to cloakParticles spread in electrified bluster Then regeneration with one brief strokeThe course of all planets altered Careen with fervor; aftermath...
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A most interesting,wonderful and enjoyable poem!I loved the use of words not normally used in everyday life, they made an artistic poem of some magnitude. Well written and well done S$ Aspiringpoets...
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I appreciate your comments, MrLeslie. Amazing how one touch can reinvent the universe --S$
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YES! Unfortunately I have forgotten what the touch feels like that would re-invent my world! Leslie{Mr}. AKA Screaming Eagle. Aspiringpoets site.HitAngels site.
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I know this work could use some polishing...How do you describe a physical reaction so catastrophic that it reinvents who you are???? dunno. So I went for a scientific slant....not real romantic but...
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S$, I wouldn't touch a thing in this poem! I love the "scientific wording" it gives it a fresh and original standpoint. The ending gives it all the romance it needs, because the rest shows just how...
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Sand:I agree with Bonnie. Leave it as it is. Nice job.BTW, matter can escape a black hole when it evaporates. This takes 1{with 67 zeros} years to happen. The earth is said to be 12{with 9 zeros}...
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Thank you, groriter. I also enjoyed the facts you posted...cool.--S$
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